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                                                        Loonatics Forever:
                                                                  Part 1

                                               Season 1. Episode 1 . Part 3


Deuce : I WILL NOT LOSE TO A RODENT LIKE YOU!!

Ace : I WON'T LET AN ALIEN LIKE YA TAKE OVER OUR WORLD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

( Both fight forces.)

Ace : GUARDIAN STRIKE SWORD!!!!!!!! (Strikes at Deuce.  He blocks the shot.) Dammit!!!!

Deuce : NOW IT IS TIME TO HAVE A TASTE OF YOUR OWN MEDICINE!!! ( Whacks Aces sword off of his hand.) HA PAYBACK RODENT!!!!

Ace : Dammit!!!!! ( Went to block Deuces attack but forgot he's not in his costume. Deuce sliced and cuts a wound on Aces arm.) AAAAAAAAAAAUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUGHH!!!!

Deuce : How's it feel Ace!? Huh!? How does it feel!!??

Ace : ( holding pressure on his arm has it bleeds he shivers.) Dammit….. AUGH!!!!!!! MY ARM!!!!!!!! (Seeing much blood he fainted. The dark shadow appeared up to Ace. Ace only blacked out for couple of minutes he slightly opens his eyes sees Deuce draws a sword at Ace.)

Deuce : Awe you fainted….. You didn't die…. Well you will soon.

Ace : Go ahead coward. Juz do it……

Deuce : As you wish……. Goodnight Ace… (about to finish him off. )

Granny Teresa :  NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!! ( Knocks Deuce down.) Ace! ! Ace! !

Ace : Terese….. it's not safe. Get outta here please.  

Granny Teresa : Ace your hurt!!!

Ace : CALL FOR HELP TERESE!!!! NOW!!!!!!!

Granny Teresa : Loonatics breach!!!! Get over here fast!!!

Lexi : Ok on our way!!!!!!

Granny Teresa : Let's get out of here! !!

Ace : ( As he was about to grab her hand to escape he heard Granny Teresa exclaimed. Ace turns to look at her his face was in shock and priceless.) Terese?! (Terese looks at Ace in a stone priceless look on her face was afraid to look down but her eyes turned dull and red drips out of her mouth. ) Terese what's wrong?  (He looks down sees a sword impaled into her Ace was afraid.) Terese…… Don't look at it. (She looks down) DON'T LOOK DOWN! ! (She Collapses as soon the weapon pulled out of her. Ace catches her and cried. ) NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO! TERESE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Granny Teresa : Ugh! (Coughing ) Ace?  

Ace : Hang on Terese…. Juz hang on.  Help is on the way.  

Granny Teresa : I won't be able to make it…..(coughing )

Ace : No….. don't say tat!! Why didn't you tell anyone we needed…..

Granny Teresa : Don't be angry with your teammates…..

Ace : Please……. ( Looks up in tears looking at Deuce and gives him the angry eyes.) Don't leave us…….

Granny Teresa : Ace…. Promise me that you can lead ‘em...guide ‘em…. Fight for all of us……

Ace : I don't know if I can…..

Granny Teresa : Ace…… I know you can.  

Ace : I won't let you die. (Crying ) Please….. Terese?

Granny Teresa : I finally done a good deed….. In my past I hated for what I had done to this planet.  Now…. I may rest in peace…. I hope you forgive me.

Ace : What you mean? Terese! ? What did you do! ? Tell me? ? What is it I don't know?  

Granny Teresa: I don't have time to tell you. My little Zadavia can tell you….. I'm sorry we didn't tell you all….. (coughing ) tell em….. Find Justice….Fight your planet… (Coughing worst but then gasping but then takes a last breath and dies.)

Ace : TERESE!!!!!!

Deuce : Are you done sobering now?

Ace : ( Pants heavily with tears coming down looked extremely pissed.) YOU DID TIS!!!!!!!! YOU DONE TIS!!!! YOU DAMN BASTARD!!!!!!!!! ( Takes his guardian sword out.) I'm going to tear you apart and make you wish you weren't born…….

Deuce : That old traitor deserved it.  

(While the Loonatics came over they heard a loud battle cry.)

Lexi : I hear Ace!!!!! Let's go! !

Tech : I hope we're not to….la-te.. ( sighs ) Ace!  Granny Teresa!  

Lexi : ACE STOP WHAT ARE YA…!!??

( Ace was in rage mode attacks Deuce draws his sword up to the air. The moonlight shines on the sword has the light brights up bounces up the surface.  Cuts out to the wall with Aces shadow. You can hear Deuce beg mercy at first then tricks Ace. Ace later brings down the sword as he loud cries along with Dueces battle cry shows the shadow of Ace impales Duece. Duece is down. Then cuts shows Aces blue eyes sparkling like water pures out his eyes to his furry cheeks… he dropped his weapon. Trembling has he falls to his knees holding onto his wound wondering what he has done. This left his friends speechless.  He never killed a living soul til now…. He isolated himself from the others while the team realized that Granny Teresa is dead. They all cried. Ace completly lost it. He looks at the team and their fallen caretaker he felt he was responsible for her death.)

Ace : ( Really upset looks up) W..why?! WHY! ? WHY WE HAD TO SUFFAH LIKE TIS?! TIS ISN'T FAIR!!! SHE DIDN'T DESERVE TAT AT ALL!!! GRAAAAAANNYYYYY TEEEEERRREEEEESAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!!!! ( Breaks down. ) I'm so sorry…..so sorry….

( Days later Ace hasn't been himself. He had been on his bedroom looking at the ceiling. He hasn't spoken to anyone. Everyone seems to be very worried about Ace. Duck finally was getting back to health. 2 weeks later since her death Duck knocks Aces door.)

Duck : Ace?? May I come in? Ace??? Please…  We miss you a lot…. I'm sorry…. I wanted to let you know we're all here for ya…. Hey um remember the…(Shows Ace very sad)  old 21st century song?? “You wanna build a Snowman,” song? We kinda made a song up just for you to cheer ya up…(goes back to Duck)  ok I'll start singing…..

(Singing)

Oh our best friend
You wanna come out to talk?
Juz please come out so we can walk
Like we juz can't end…

We're all here waiting
For you to come out
For how long it has been taking us??

So you wanna talk about it….
It doesn't has to be now….

( Ring tone message)

Huh??

{RINGTONE MESSAGE○○●●●

     (ACE)
   ●●●Plz leave me be, Duck…..

(Sighs then says)

Okay…. Maybe some other time…

[Later Rev and Lexi gives a try]

Rev: (Singing. )

Do ya need sum company?

Lexi : ( Singing. )

You've been in there feeling all alone

Rev : (Singing. )

We're sorry to keep bothering ya

Lexi : ( Singing. )

We really need ya to come out….

Rev and Lexi: (Singing. )

It's hasn't been the same
Without ya
Has days has gone by…..

(Ace breaks something in his room the two girls stunned has they walked away. Ace looks down for what he busted.  It was a photograph of his deceased father…. And Ace when he was a baby. Ace tears came down has he drops it. The picture was faced down then he hears another knock it was Tech. )

Tech : Ace c'mon…. Please…. You can't stay and grieve for long… ugh as much I don't want to do this but…

(Singing. )

You're stronger than that you are
We all miss you day by day
Juz let us come in and talk to ya
We can't do this no other way
You need us more than we
Let us try to help ya go through this pain..

(Speaking)

Captain will ya please come out….we need ya…

(Ace freezes at that moment. After a while he walks up to the door. He hesitates at first to open it but he opens the door finally and everyone was standing behind Tech.)

Ace : I need sum time…. To think tis ovah….  I'll talk to all of ya tonight.
:'(
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